Please have read of some of our brilliant writing tasks. The Cold task is our first attempt and the Hot task is our independent final task after lots of immerse , imitate and invent strategies within that genre . We have just used a small part of the children’s writing to show the impact of their learning. Where there is an amber task at the start it means that it was a new genre for that child which they may not have come across before so some immersion teaching will have already been taught.
Year 6
L.O To write an entry for a personal diary
Cold Task
On Saturday morning me and my mates were going on a bike ride up by Everton Hiils and we did tricks, flicks and wheelies .We went through every park nearby our houses….
Hot Task , two weeks later
It was hard to swallow my food with the old man watching me . It was hard to eat that vile thing that he had dropped on the old wooden table . I didn’t want to leave a crumb just incase the old man , who I didn’t know until five minutes ago, gave me a beating….
Year 4
L.O To write a story from another culture .
Cold Task
In Tokio (Japan) , there was a girl called Yemi . She had a taste of adventure and so did her friend Cathline , they wore jumpers as red as blood….
Hot Task , three weeks later
As the heat blasted through India , Julka lay on the hard , rocky road trying to get to sleep. It wasn’t long before she fell into a fitful slumber , not aware of what would happen to her the next day….
Year 3
L.O To write a set of instructions Cold Task
First you need to get your ingredients . Next put sauce on the pizza base and spread it with a knife. After that sprinkle on some cheese and put your pepperoni on top…
Hot Task , two weeks later
My marvellous medicine is going to blow your mind and is mouth watering delight ,so give your Grandmother some and she will get a nasty shock ! What you need : Spider’s legs, pink fairy liquid, white baby powder, slimy worms and brown paint ….
L.O To write a shape poem
Amber Task
A flower that shines , it’s so nice it looks like a magnificent star. I love flowers, they grow so fast like a rocket going to space.
Hot Task , one week later
I will put in my box : The swish of a black river with a purple snowman melting in the centre , fire from nostrils of a Chinese dragon that explodes in the night sky like fireworks .My box is fashioned by bright blue ribbons , a red bow on the lid and purple dots in the corners…
L.O To write a story with a familiar setting
Cold Task
Last night I woke up in the morning and got dressed and then I went down the stairs really quickly. I made my own breakfast at seven and after that I watched TV…
Hot task , three weeks later
Once there was a little girl called Lilly. She had long, blonde hair with big , blue eyes and she always had a smile on her face . She lived on a street with lots and lots of colourful houses ……
Year 2
L.O I can write a the style of Roald Dahl
Amber Task
Willy Wonka tells everybody that there are five golden tickets to be won . Charlie buys a chocolate bar and finds a golden ticket .Charlie tells his family that he has found a golden ticket.
Hot Task , two weeks later
There was a small kind boy with golden blonde hair called Charlie. He lived with his family , they were very poor . He lived in a wrecked and damaged house with broken windows . One winters day….
L.O I can write a report
Cold Task
Dogs,
What do dogs look like ? Spotty, black , white ,orange , brown.
What do dogs eat ? Can foods , bones .
What do dogs drink ? Water.
Hot Task , two weeks later
A report on elephants
Introduction
In this report you will find lots of facts about elephants . You will find out where they live , what they eat and how they look so please read on .
Appearance
Elephants have grey wrinkly skin. There are two kinds of elephant , the Asian elephant and the African elephant….